Ego... Why... My eyebrows are screaming in crazy excited monologing YEAAAARRGG!! I... cant... finish... my emotional.... uuuuunnnnhhh..... pbpbpbpbpblbl... I'm going to cry.
Work will need to be done, but that flash was entirely it own kind. there was no choppiness or need for smoother animation. That flash was meant to be all of its own and nothing more.
Yes, I agree with GamerMattyR34 and his opinion, make it a little longer and broaden the storyline. Perhaps you should follow tom-owen's advice as well.
That was a really good first try. animation is a bit off and please find a female voice for her. Other then that, it was good, make a story behind it that last longer then 15 sec. and see what kind of reviews and votes you get.
What the hell was that?
The sound was very badly recorded,
The mouths of the characters did not even come close to matching the voices,
Randomness is OK on Newgrounds and people respect it, but this is out of line and not Newgrounds worthy.
I know you probably wont respond, almost know one does anymore, but I'll review all the same. That was a video worth turning into a screen saver I think. It just flowed forwards through the story line like a small stream over rocks, thats what kept me hooked on it until it was finished.
Just if you do turn it into a screen saver, make it where it said "The End" erase that and put Mr. Rectangle standing to the right of the tower. Then the loop restarts with him walking to the right as he did in the beginning of the flash.
If you do all that, send me an IM to my Newgrounds account and I'll come visit you site to check it out and download it. I can do my best to give it some publicity. (MySpace, E-mail, etc.)
that's an awesome idea, and funnily enough, i was thinking the same thing yesterday, but i was thinking of just having the scrolling environments as apposed to the whole cartoon, but yea i guess it could work, thing is i don't know how to make it into a screensaver, but I'll give it a ago.
p.s. i didn't just respond because you said 'you probably wont respond' i usually respond to things that interest me :D
fatrat454
All 24 flash Reviews
Rated 5 / 5 stars April 18, 2011
Ego...
Ego... Why... My eyebrows are screaming in crazy excited monologing YEAAAARRGG!! I... cant... finish... my emotional.... uuuuunnnnhhh..... pbpbpbpbpblbl... I'm going to cry.
Rated 5 / 5 stars September 17, 2008
WHAT!!!
Glad you put those together guys, I had no idea about a few.
-it's illegal to tie a croc/gater to a fire hydrant in Florida somewhere...
Rated 2.5 / 5 stars August 22, 2008
ow.
Ok, its fast so what? right? I played it over and over and could not find the syncro. and i got MAYBE on hit.
Syncing probs. OH YES.
Rated 3 / 5 stars August 21, 2008
awww...
Ok, I have watched the youtube videos of that same thing. You gave it away almost once his face changed. thats not right!!
LOL it was meant to be a HER but I admit she was a tad bit butch =D
yea if I do another, it'll be like.. more sudden =O
Rated 2.5 / 5 stars July 31, 2008
Your flash
Work will need to be done, but that flash was entirely it own kind. there was no choppiness or need for smoother animation. That flash was meant to be all of its own and nothing more.
Yes, I agree with GamerMattyR34 and his opinion, make it a little longer and broaden the storyline. Perhaps you should follow tom-owen's advice as well.
Rated 3 / 5 stars July 31, 2008
Your Flash
That was a really good first try. animation is a bit off and please find a female voice for her. Other then that, it was good, make a story behind it that last longer then 15 sec. and see what kind of reviews and votes you get.
ok thank you fo the tips
Rated 0 / 5 stars July 30, 2008
What!!
What the hell was that?
The sound was very badly recorded,
The mouths of the characters did not even come close to matching the voices,
Randomness is OK on Newgrounds and people respect it, but this is out of line and not Newgrounds worthy.
you make one flash then tell me this
Rated 2 / 5 stars July 30, 2008
I'm POPING!!
I... I... Dont really know what you can write for a review for that flash... I... I understood part of it but... Yea...
I was actually looking for that song, thanx, now I can download it from Napster and sabatoge someone with it!! Muhaha... hee hee...
Rated 4 / 5 stars July 30, 2008
I liked it.
I know you probably wont respond, almost know one does anymore, but I'll review all the same. That was a video worth turning into a screen saver I think. It just flowed forwards through the story line like a small stream over rocks, thats what kept me hooked on it until it was finished.
Just if you do turn it into a screen saver, make it where it said "The End" erase that and put Mr. Rectangle standing to the right of the tower. Then the loop restarts with him walking to the right as he did in the beginning of the flash.
If you do all that, send me an IM to my Newgrounds account and I'll come visit you site to check it out and download it. I can do my best to give it some publicity. (MySpace, E-mail, etc.)
that's an awesome idea, and funnily enough, i was thinking the same thing yesterday, but i was thinking of just having the scrolling environments as apposed to the whole cartoon, but yea i guess it could work, thing is i don't know how to make it into a screensaver, but I'll give it a ago.
p.s. i didn't just respond because you said 'you probably wont respond' i usually respond to things that interest me :D
Rated 3.5 / 5 stars June 26, 2008
lol
I cant believe I missed these episodes of yours. I will officially tell friends that I have found the best Pokemon parody in flash.
-Fatrat454